1)The value that my group and I are trying to represent is speaking up for others when they are in need.
2)I agree with Sam when she states that our group has done the editing well. Each one of us shared the work of editing and putting in our own ideas. Also as Sam states we added comedy to our video by having two girl bullies bullying a boy.
3)What my group still needs to complete is the transition between Zach and bulllies leaving and Sam and Luis talking.
4)What we need most feed back on is if our video flows smoothly and if the transitions are understandable. And also if we used the right camera angles as Sam states.
5)At first we descovered that we needed a second person to play the second bully. We got Michaela to play the second bully. Also having two females playing the bullies; we were unsure how peoplle would react to it but we were able to get around that and sell the theme we were trying to portray.
the conflict was between a a boy whos getting bullied at chool by a couple of girls.
ReplyDeletehere are shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action
1.when the bullied show up and start to bother the boy
2.when (sam) girl thats walking by passes
3.when the campo shows up
4.when the student sees the campo.
here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action:when the bullies are surrounding him and then the campo shows up
you could also:have eddited some scences better
the climax occured when:the campo takes the bullies to the office.
in the resolution the student gets saved by the campo and his friend
we especially like the setting in lunch and how his friends walks by to help him out.
we rated the editing a 8 one edit we woulkd change was when the student aproaches him and begins talking like if nothing about the bullying happened..
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the title was catchy
you guys could do a little less on some shot times and can improve on editing some sences
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overall we tought your film coulkd use alot of room for improvements. what we liked the best was the message and lunch setting our strongest suggestion is that you could plan your plot better.
feedback given by Jorge Chavez & Alicia Fernandez